First Version Video Feedback.

We've had some feedback from the first version of our video posted below, mostly positve, however some ponits have been raised about the over all look of the video.

Both Mr.Ford and Mr.Nicole have said that the shots where the band is outside to not match the ideolgy put forward in the rest of the video, we intend to ammend this by either moving them to further back in the song, where by this point the mise en scene would be clear enough to be able to use them confidently.

There is also a shot early on in the video where horseman's head is out of the shot and makes the sequence look unproffesional. We can simply replace this shot with another out of the shots we didnt use initially.

The fianl thing we need to do is put the opening sequence on the video.